Thank you for this dreadsword. Based on your feedback as well as others I definitely need to do a better job explaining the concept.
>When would I use it? What would I use it for? Why would I use it instead of any other alternative? Answer those in one or two sentences...
Whenever you feel like exploring in a new city, or your own city, you can use Wanderous to create a walking or driving route between one or more points of interest. Wanderous's POIs have been created based on by social and photo sharing hotspots so the destinations are novel yet enjoyable.
Could it be worth including a few stories or "case studies"? For example, "John has just moved to Melbourne and he'd like to know what hidden gems exist on the way to his new job, so..." If you've already had beta testers, I'm sure a few have compelling stories about how the app has led them to hidden gems - if I can understand how the app has "changed their lives", I'd be compelled to give it a go.
>When would I use it? What would I use it for? Why would I use it instead of any other alternative? Answer those in one or two sentences...
Whenever you feel like exploring in a new city, or your own city, you can use Wanderous to create a walking or driving route between one or more points of interest. Wanderous's POIs have been created based on by social and photo sharing hotspots so the destinations are novel yet enjoyable.